I took a deep breath and sat on the
weathered wooden park bench. Sweat dripped down my back as a result to the
97-degree heat. I was so glad to have made it to the shade and finally sitting
down.
A
refreshing breeze blew my bangs infront of my eyes. I smiled and leaned back to
enjoy my view. Staring at the river, it calmly flowed towards my left as a
beautiful white bird perched elegantly on, what seemed to be, a sand dune. It
looked so serene and I wondered how it was not uncomfortably hot, but suddenly
it jolted up and flew a feet away submerging its body into the cool water. It
looked refreshed. From then on, the bird never stopped moving-swimming, flying,
fishing.
My
attention shifted as a biker flew in front of me. She gave a quick “hey”
without turning her helmeted head. She was dressed in typical “biker” clothing-
fitted hot pink shirt and black biking shorts. She looked like a professional.
That is until I saw what was attached to the back of her thin tires—a baby trailer.
A baby trailer filled with two fluffy white dogs. Happiest dogs I have ever
seen. Sitting in the shade, wind in their hair. They definitely turned and
smiled at me.
A
dragonfly that was about the size of my palm flew a few feet in front of my
face then it made its way over the curved sidewalk and to its way to the
river. The initial buzzing sound always makes me jump in fear for my life. To
me, bugs should never get that big.
Trees
lined both sides of the river. One side provided me much needed shade and the
other a dark green curtain. The trees seemed to dance together as one with
the wind as the choreographer, but there was one small break. One tree stood
limp with no leaves. Because of the break in the leaves, a small sliver of life
past the sheet of green could be spotted. I squinted and noticed that behind the big
beautiful trees laid a perfectly manicured green of golf. Then I suddenly saw a
golf cart park right in my view and two young men got out and began putting. I
heard a soft “swoosh” off in the distance.
The
rhythmic army-green water recaptured my attention. It made me think back to my
days of elementary dance class. Every week we would focus on an object and how
it moved. One week was water and we explored moving our bodies as water along with a
huge piece of blue fabric. We made ripples just like the river in front of me,
but this river had more ridges from the opposing wind force. It made for a
beautiful contrast. Then I spotted a turtle. It was about the size of our classroom clock. It dipped up and down in the water but never side-to-side so the
current swept it along with a few straight lines of yellow pollen. It almost
looked like a conveyer belt: the trees stayed still but the water, never changing
in appearance, simply moved at a constant speed.
I shifted my view
to my right. The acorn-stained pavement twisted and wound to the end of my
sight. A man-made dam congested the smooth-flowing river. The path continued to
a bridge sat in the distance with cars zooming over it constantly. I could see
them but not hear them. Instead, I heard a train run behind me.
By this time, I
had caught my breath. The air did not feel as hot to me; instead, it seemed to
be a warm day with a cool breeze. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. The
smell of mossy water filled my nose. I opened my eyes and stared again at the
murky water. I could see the reflections of the big trees clear as day.
Two more friendly
bikers passed and chirped a friendly hello.
I then spotted a
mom and baby turtle swimming right at the surface of the water. The mom led
slowly as the baby bobbed up and down following the trail of its mother. With
that, a small smile formed on my face and I was about ready to leave.
I really enjoyed reading your post! Your description of your surroundings made me feel like I was there. Even if I was not actually there. The tone of your entire reflection is serene and calming. I appreciated your attention to detail with the bike, and your humorous commentary that, "Bugs should never get that big." I could not agree more.
ReplyDeleteAdditionally, I appreciate your use of diction in your reflection! Words like "rhythmic" I especially enjoyed "acorn-stained" brought your reflection more personality. Lastly, your simile of the conveyer belt is super impressive. Your reflection deserves a standing ovation.
Great description of your reflection experience, thanks! I enjoyed your reflection.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job making your writing come to life. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the detail that you provided and the casual way that you incorporated humor throughout your reflection. You also had really great descriptive words to make me feel as though I was with you at the time of this reflection.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about the different things you observed at the Trinity. More specifically, I appreciated the way that you began and ended your reflection with the picture of people along the river. This showed that the Trinity is a common place to go, however, a soothing and tranquil place of rest all at the same time.
Reading this post, a since of calm has taken over me. I feel the urge to slow my breathing and look around my living room and observe the miniscule things in life. This is definitely not the lifestyle of my past week. Instead of enjoying the little activities that keep the world spending, I have been sprinting all over trying to accomplish my own personal tasks. Yes, I do feel it is important for me to give all of my effort towards every job I have signed up for, I do believe that pure happiness is the most important. Reading your post, I have caught a since of absolute bless: a few moments of nothing but breathing, observation, pondering and enjoyment. This simple mediation is exactly what I have been missing in my week. Before reading the post, I had not been looking forward to my own personal time with the Trinity River, but now I feel it calling me for moments of rest.
ReplyDeleteI must also commend you on how observant you are towards nature and your surroundings. This is a quality I lack and it amazes me how keen you are towards what is happening around you. When you spotted the biker, you did not only see the fact that she was a biker, but so much more, such as her attire, her social skills, and her animals. Everything that you saw in those few minutes on the park bench has completely come to life in your blog. Your moments with the Trinity River expanded into the a few moments with everything that came to the river that hour, including a few thought so of reminiscence.